tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5231952.post1751785998323939178..comments2024-01-17T09:43:44.882-06:00Comments on The Frugal Chariot: Poem for MeditationJameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00561320676355168336noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5231952.post-35853914906479373792013-03-20T11:52:28.153-06:002013-03-20T11:52:28.153-06:00Thanks for your comment. You make a salient obser...Thanks for your comment. You make a salient observation.Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00561320676355168336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5231952.post-21269855757552771572013-03-19T23:30:33.577-06:002013-03-19T23:30:33.577-06:00A fine sonnet; but don't you think the poem is...A fine sonnet; but don't you think the poem is weaker for the shift in tone after the second quatrain? I take it the line, "If from thyself to store thou wouldst covert" refers to the lover's possible refusal to create a child?M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11986367136179755609noreply@blogger.com